Safari yangu ya dhahabu Botswana

[Rosicky]

shusheni link ya stori ya Bao 3

 

[STUNTER]

Jamaa wa story ana mimba changa nn
...mbona ana zila zila sana sura limemkauka kama ngozi ya mapumbu

@JamiiForums watu kama hawa mnawaachia wanatuharibia uzi

 

[SACO]

Mnao mkosoasoa mtoa story mtulize makasesela yenu! Nawaambia tuliza!!

 

[Whiteday]

mwingine kaja

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Hahaha

 

[Binti1]

Huu uzi ulipaswa kuisha kwa episode 2 au 3.
Isipokuwa anachofanya mwandishi ni kuingiza maelezo mengi ambayo siyo ya lazima sana.

Mfano angalia episode ya 1 na 2, akitaja eneo la hapa Bongo mfano mwenge mataa anataka elezee hapo mwenge mataa kuna nini, aelezee mpaka wauza magazeti hapo,,aelezee mama lishe, aelezee vibaka, haya yote ni kurefusha stori.


Issue ni safr anapaswa kunyoosha safr ilivyokuwa basi, lakini asilimia 95% ya maelezo yanazunguka hapa hapa bongo tu.

Endeleeni tu hizi tabia za kuanzisha uzi kupima upepo Mungu asaidie huu uishe salama.

Story telling is an art and art doesn't have a formula. Muache ahadithie anavyotaka ndo style yake ya uandishi na kuhadithia.Makasiriko ya nini?

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[STUNTER]

Story telling is an art and art doesn't have a formula. Muache ahadithie anavyotaka ndo style yake ya uandishi na kuhadithia.Makasiriko ya nini?

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Watu wengine wagonjwa wa akili

 

[ni ngumu]

Shida yenu tukiwaamini kdg na story zenu mwisho wa siku mkisimangwa kdg mnasusa

 

[Malaika Gabrieli]

🛃🛃🛃🛃🛃🛃🛃🛃🛃🛃🛃🛃🛃🛃🛃

 

[bolivia]

Aisee ubaharia ni kutoka na nguo uliyovaa pekee afu nani jamaa sasa mkuu?

 

[bolivia]

Uongozi wa jamiiforums.com naomba muwe mnafuta hizi nyuzi inakuwa ntu anakutia nyege tu kumuweka hunuweki bhn

Watu km nyinyi mnakera sana aisee kwann usimpe anayeleta hbr km hii nafas ujui anaish mazingira gani?? Shubamitttttt

 

[bolivia]

Jamaa wa story ana mimba changa nn
...mbona ana zila zila sana sura limemkauka kama ngozi ya mapumbu

We ni shoga nini?? Leta ww story

 

[STUNTER]

Story imeishia wapi???

 

[Washawasha]

Haya tuna endelea kusubiri
Nalog off

 

[Coconut tree]

Shusha uzi mzee baba

 

[geofizor]

Mpaka leo jamaa hajaja duuh

 

[Malaika Gabrieli]

yupo border 🛃

 

[Alistalikopaul]

Hizi story

 

[suleym]

Mtu mzima hovyo kabisa, unaanzishaje uzi halafu unaukimbia, ulilazimishwa Midnight, umejishushia heshima kwa hili.

 

[dabluz]

Huu uzi ulipaswa kuisha kwa episode 2 au 3.
Isipokuwa anachofanya mwandishi ni kuingiza maelezo mengi ambayo siyo ya lazima sana.

Mfano angalia episode ya 1 na 2, akitaja eneo la hapa Bongo mfano mwenge mataa anataka elezee hapo mwenge mataa kuna nini, aelezee mpaka wauza magazeti hapo,,aelezee mama lishe, aelezee vibaka, haya yote ni kurefusha stori.


Issue ni safr anapaswa kunyoosha safr ilivyokuwa basi, lakini asilimia 95% ya maelezo yanazunguka hapa hapa bongo tu.

Endeleeni tu hizi tabia za kuanzisha uzi kupima upepo Mungu asaidie huu uishe salama.

Wajuaji mshaanza tena..mnataka tukose na huku

 

[He Is Him]

"Mniwie radhi kidogo nitaleta mwendelezo mda sio mrefu"
Maneno ya mwisho ya midnght