Michirizi ya Damu

[kiker]

A good story Shunie... the first episode and the name Fareed quickly suggests that he is a Muslim ( though he might be a Christian) .... but in the middle of the story the man wanted to change his ways and he run into a church! Now he knows how to pray in a muslim way and he seems to know many things about the religion! Here there is a lack of information ( or background information) which will easily enable the reader to grasp this dramatic change! As one of the good readers myself, I love a story even if is a fiction story .. the story iwe ina resemble the truth hapa inanoga zaidi.... My comment is not a critic but a complement to the wonderful storytelling of yours! I am your fan of course! A big apology for those who will be annoyed by this comment and mixing of languages.

Mkuu kama sikosei Fareed toka mwanzo ni mwislam..na ndio maana alipendelea sana uarabuni kufanya ufirauni wake..so there is no dramatic change!anaijua dini ya kiislam haswaa!..kama angejifanya ni kasisi (padre)..ndo ingetokea dramatic change!..nadhani mwandishi yupo vzr kabisa..ukizingatia egypt ni nchi ya kiislam maana 95%ya population ni waislam!

 

[Killmonger]

Mkuu kama sikosei Fareed toka mwanzo ni mwislam..na ndio maana alipendelea sana uarabuni kufanya ufirauni wake..so there is no dramatic change!anaijua dini ya kiislam haswaa!..kama angejifanya ni kasisi (padre)..ndo ingetokea dramatic change!..nadhani mwandishi yupo vzr kabisa..ukizingatia egypt ni nchi ya kiislam maana 95%ya population ni waislam!

Basi mkuu hapo sasa ndo nilipopotea kwasababu kama alikua muislam tokea mwanzo then background ya yeye kutaka kua mtu mpya na kwenda kuungama dhambi zake mbele ya Padri ndio niliyoikosa.

 

[Malaika wa Kifo]

Shikamoo

 

[Tumosa]

Shikamoo

Sitaki

 

[Jackal]

Jamani hivi umeshafika eenh mm nakusiliza ww sasa lini sasa jamani[/QUOTE

Ila Shunie usijekuta wewe ni TISS nashuka kwenye basi toka mkoani na mazagazaga yangu mara nadakwa na TISS si unajua tena Mimi naongoza kwa kumkandia Jiwe na Bashite wake!

 

[Tumosa]

Ila Shunie usijekuta wewe ni TISS nashuka kwenye basi toka mkoani na mazagazaga yangu mara nadakwa na TISS si unajua tena Mimi naongoza kwa kumkandia Jiwe na Bashite wake!

 

[Jackal]

Haaa haaa Tumosa umeliona hilo?

 

[Tumosa]

Haaa haaa Tumosa umeliona hilo?

Unajtetea au unataka kuzipeperusha zawadi

 

[Sakayo]

Asante my dear

 

[Shunie]

Asante my dear

 

[Shunie]

Ila Shunie usijekuta wewe ni TISS nashuka kwenye basi toka mkoani na mazagazaga yangu mara nadakwa na TISS si unajua tena Mimi naongoza kwa kumkandia Jiwe na Bashite wake!

nimecheka

 

[Shunie]

Nasubiria mvua zikatike huku mashambani nipandishe huko mjini Shunie.Bado nakumbuka ahadi niliyokuahidi toka enzi za malkia wa Goshen!

Niko mm nakusubiri

 

[Jackal]

nimecheka

Haaa haa nasikia dar huko kuna watu wasiojulikana!

 

[Jackal]

Unajtetea au unataka kuzipeperusha zawadi

Sitaki kuzipeperusha lakini tahadhari muhimu.Hata kuna wanategea watu wajiunge na magroup ya hadithi WhatsApp Mimi sikwenda aisee,isijekuwa ni walewale wasiojulikana!

 

[Jackal]

Niko mm nakusubiri

Sawa ngoja hizi vurugu za mvua zipungue nitie timu huko jijini.

 

[Jackal]

Niko mm nakusubiri

Sawa ngoja hizi vurugu za mvua zipungue nitie timu huko jijini.

 

[Shunie]

Haaa haa nasikia dar huko kuna watu wasiojulikana!

Hahhaha mm najulikana bana usiogope uwe na amani zote uniambie tu bus ulilopanda linafika sa ngapi na nguo ulizovaa tutaonana ubungo

 

[Shunie]

Sitaki kuzipeperusha lakini tahadhari muhimu.Hata kuna wanategea watu wajiunge na magroup ya hadithi WhatsApp Mimi sikwenda aisee,isijekuwa ni walewale wasiojulikana!

wewe ni muoga

 

[Tumosa]

Sitaki kuzipeperusha lakini tahadhari muhimu.Hata kuna wanategea watu wajiunge na magroup ya hadithi WhatsApp Mimi sikwenda aisee,isijekuwa ni walewale wasiojulikana!

pole aisee

 

[Shunie]

Sawa ngoja hizi vurugu za mvua zipungue nitie timu huko jijini.

Hakuna shida jackal