Do you use AI to make points or translate your points from Kiswahili to English? Then reformat it with a bit of slangs to make it sound more human?
Because I've noticed a strange change of pattern in your writing, the most prevalent is your incorrect use of punctuation marks. In Kiswahili, you'd usually put a comma at the center of two words, which is incorrect. Yet, in English, the comma comes immediately preceding a word. As it should be grammatically.
My advice is that you ought to practice more without fear of judgment and try to read English books more often. Start simple without the need of strong vocabulary to sound unnecessarily sophisticated. No one speaks like that unless you're a living academic paper.
Anyway, I just want to see if the Tanzanian people are as brave as their words. Though, I highly doubt it.