Rich Mavoko karudi rasmi

[Marwa_J_Merengo]

 

[Frank Wanjiru]

Karudi kutoka wapi Mkuu?

 

[Abby The Rider]

Alikua wapi!?

 

[kawombe]

Kutoka wapi?

 

[TODAYS]

Alikuwa kijijini kwao akijishugulisha na kilimo ila jembe kwa mara ya kwanza limemtupa mkulima so karudi mjini...

 

[Scars]

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[Daudi Mchambuzi]

Alikua wapi!?

alikuwa chimbo

 

[PNC]

Iko vizur

 

[MKUYENGE]

uimbaji wake wakawaida

 

[Marwa_J_Merengo]

Karudi kutoka wapi Mkuu?

Machakani

 

[Marwa_J_Merengo]

uimbaji wake wakawaida

Lakini kajitahidi sema naona hana uhakika kama hii ngoma itatoboa

 

[ZING SOKONI]

Ngoma kali,jamaa kusema kweli ana kipaji cha kipekee.

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[niachiemimi]

Kumaliziana Mb huku.

 

[Kingsmann]

"Mwanangu ukitoka usirudi, fanya tupate dish tuishi good."

Nani kawaza kama mimi hapa?[emoji3][emoji3][emoji3][emoji3]

 

[Kiranga]

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Video katoa kimtaa, sehemu nyingi majalala, halafu ka contrast na sehemu anapata good time.

Vitu nilivyoona.

1. Kapiga maisha halisi, the video is gully. Hata kwenye good time si pahali ambapo tofauti sana na maisha ya Mtanzania kama a South African villa. Hapo machakani panaweza kuwa Uwanja wa Fisi, hapo ushuani panaweza kuwa Kichangachui. So its realistic. Kwa mbali inanikumbusha "Ghetto Red Hot" ya Super Cat.

2. Hajatumia model wazungu. This is a plus. Sipendi Bongofleva artists wanapotumia models wazungu kwenye video. I am not racist, but this sends a nessage that they equate whiteness with beauty.

3.Mercedes Benz old model has a vintage touch. This is style versus crass consumerism.So Original Gangsta.

4. Kwenye muziki, production iko standard. Ila for some reason inaonekana rushed, unfinished. Mavoko anaweza kuimba, ila huu wimbo unaonekana unfinished. Kama kuna chorus/bridge/ harmonization hazijawekwa bado. It is the type of a song that will be a filler in an album, not a hit single.

5. Even the cryptic lyrics sound unfinished and half assed. Kama aliharakishwa. No memorable punchlines. No vivid storytelling.

6. Inawezekana kukawa na issue za budgeting au management zinazomuangusha Mavoko asiweze kutengeneza suave hits.

7. Huu wimbo una potential kubwa sana, maudhui yake ya mtu anayepigana licha ya mfumo kumkandamiza yanavutia. Video si mbaya, tatizo inaonekana kama wimbo umeharakishwa na kuna vionjo fulani havijamaliziwa.

8. Pengine ndivyo Mavoko alivyotaka. But this is not how one gets a hit single, this song is an album filler. Angetoa a hit single halafu hii ikawa album filler ingekuwa rahisi zaidi kumuelewa. Michael Jackson did not release "Pretty Young Thing (PYT)" before "Billie Jean" and "Thriller". Not that this is equivalent to "Pretty Young Thing".

9.Mavoko has to work on his lyrics and delivery. I mean there is gully delivery, I get that. But whatever happenned to clever lyricism? I mran the lyrics sre not bad, especially after a second listen, but one feels they could have been better. This sounds like " The poor man's Diamond Platnumz".

10. Video haina hype men wa kutosha. Kukosa hype men kwenye video ni suala la bajeti? Mazingira? Ni kuonesha ametengwa? Au ni kuonesha anakumbatia style ya kutoka kivyakevyake?

 

[Marwa_J_Merengo]

Video katoa kimtaa, sehemu nyingi majalala, halafu ka contrast na sehemu anapata good time.

Vitu nilivyoona.

1. Kapiga maisha halisi, the video is gully. Hata kwenye good time si pahali ambapo tofauti sana na maisha ya Mtanzania kama a South African villa. Hapo machakani panaweza kuwa Uwanja wa Fisi, hapo ushuani panaweza kuwa Kichangachui. So its realistic. Kwa mbali inanikumbusha "Ghetto Red Hot" ya Super Cat.

2. Hajatumia model wazungu. This is a plus. Sipendi Bongofleva artists wanapotumia models wazungu kwenye video. I am not racist, but this sends a nessage that they equate whiteness with beauty.

3.Mercedes Benz old model has a vintage touch. This is style versus crass consumerism.So Original Gangsta.

4. Kwenye muziki, production iko standard. Ila for some reason inaonekana rushed, unfinished. Mavoko anaweza kuimba, ila huu wimbo unaonekana unfinished. Kama kuna chorus/bridge/ harmonization hazijawekwa bado. It is the type of a song that will be a filler in an album, not a hit single.

5. Even the cryptic lyrics sound unfinished and half assed. Kama aliharakishwa. No memorable punchlines. No vivid storytelling.

6. Inawezekana kukawa na issue za budgeting au management zinazomuangusha Mavoko asiweze kutengeneza suave hits.

7. Huu wimbo una potential kubwa sana, maudhui yake ya mtu anayepigana licha ya mfumo kumkandamiza yanavutia. Video si mbaya, tatizo inaonekana kama wimbo umeharakishwa na kuna vionjo fulani havijamaliziwa.

8. Pengine ndivyo Mavoko alivyotaka. But this is not how one gets a hit single, this song is an album filler. Angetoa a hit single halafu hii ikawa album filler ingekuwa rahisi zaidi kumuelewa. Michael Jackson did not release "Pretty Young Thing (PYT)" before "Billie Jean" and "Thriller". Not that this is equivalent to "Pretty Young Thing".

9.Mavoko has to work on his lyrics and delivery. I mean there is gully delivery, I get that. But whatever happenned to clever lyricism? I mran the lyrics sre not bad, especially after a second listen, but one feels they could have been better. This sounds like " The poor man's Diamond Platnumz".

10. Video haina hype men wa kutosha. Kukosa hype men kwenye video ni suala la bajeti? Mazingira? Ni kuonesha ametengwa? Au ni kuonesha anakumbatia style ya kutoka kivyakevyake?

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