Maskini Wambura...

[jobel]

mkuu funzadume umetisha!!

 

[Jerrymsigwa]

Funzadume kweli

 

[Mtoto halali na hela]

Maumivu ya kufa ukiwa unajiona ni makali kuliko maisha ya gerezani, ama kweli hili ni fundisho tosha.

 

[Tutor B]

Duh; hata kama story ni fix lakini kuna fundisho kubwa sana; tangu leo nawambia wanafamilia wangu (Mama Tutor B, Kadu, na Akanganyila) wasinitegemee tena mimi kwani nami ni binadamu kama wao.

 

[Ngekewa]

Nilikwishaiona pahala hii stori lakini du ilinitowa jasho!

 

[Analyse]

Duh; hata kama story ni fix lakini kuna fundisho kubwa sana; tangu leo nawambia wanafamilia wangu (Mama Tutor B, Kadu, na Akanganyila) wasinitegemee tena mimi kwani nami ni binadamu kama wao.

Mahitaji yao uwatimizie tu

 

[heaven love]

Duuhh kwl ucmtegemee mwanadamu,mungu pk yk ndio wa kumtegemea.

 

[Mshana Jr]

Story ni nzuri sana japo uhalisia ni kidogo lakini ina mafundisho mazuri

 

[Kontelo]

Story iko nzuri na imeeleweka! Ujumbe umefika.

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[kookolikoo]

Story ni nzuri sana japo uhalisia ni kidogo lakini ina mafundisho mazuri

In creative writing why bother with the truth/reality when you can create it?

 

[Abrow]

That's true!!!!!!!

 

[20PROFF]

old story

 

[katusyo]

That's true!!!!!!!

Haiwezi ikawa ya ukwli kama ni ya ukweli nani alikuja kusema wakati wote walikufa sema tunafundishwa kutokumtegemea mwanadam

 

[kajirita]

Word!!!!

 

[fiter]

imeandikwa amelaaniwa amtegemeaye mwanadamu na kumfanya kimbilio lake

 

[Bei Mbaya]

imeandikwa amelaaniwa amtegemeaye mwanadamu na kumfanya kimbilio lake

Humtegemei binadamu?
A. Ulinzi-polisi,masai,mganga

B. Kiimani-imam,mchungaji,mizimu-matambiko

C. Kifedha-wazazi,mpenzi,mwajiri