"Sitaki dawa" ya Mentor ni fraud

[Hornet]

Hahaha. Wewe unastahili pole. Ila ile story ime-work out more positively kwako nadhani, no?

hahaaa najicheka tu hapa.

 

[Lupamba's grandson]

Hujaenda bado?

Valentina nimemkuta yupo na shem so sikuweza talk anything

 

[Aragorn son of Arathorn]

Hiyo mimi nilijua ni hadithi kama nyingine za Mentor, wewe mtu uathirike and then uje uandike kwa madaha, madoido, vikorombwezo, manjonjo vile and at the same time you are grieving!!!? Ila all in all hiyo ni arts huwezi mpangia mtu cha kuandika na hii ni kwa wale mnaomlaumu, when you remove that from him he won't be the same story telling maestro

 

[Kaizer]

I saw this coming...u cannot fool all the people all the time

 

[Ayanda85]

Hivi kwa mfano ile story ni kweli ha ha haaa Mentor atakua hajawaunganisha baadhi ya memba humu kwenye hiyo grid
Ukimwi upo jamani hata kama kuna ARV

 

[housegirl]

Sasa na nyie si mtunge hadithi nyingine inayopinga unyanyapaa kwa kuwa mna ufahamu mkubwa zaidi?

kwani hataki CRITICISM? Akija mtunzi anayetetea mapenzi ya jinsia moja msianze oohh apigwe marufuku, anatuharibia vijana. mtunzi alijua art ina nguvu, kajaribu kadri ya uwezo wake. but what's the point kama inaharibu zaidi ya kusaidia?

Mwandishi kaamua kuonyesha kasumba iliyopo kwenye jamii pamoja na ufahamu mdogo au potofu kuhusu HIV.

well next time he writes about serious issues he should be better informed if at all what he really wants is to help people.

Mwandishi anaweza kuwa anajua yote hayo mnayosema hapa ila kwa sababu zake akaamua kuchagua theme moja kwa lengo fulani.

maybe. again what's the point if it does more harm than good.

yani katika chovya chovya yoote hajawahi hata kupata genital warts? gono? alilipia abortions ngapi?

angefast forward mbele aonyeshe alivyoepuka misala yot mwishowe kamuambukiza mkewe HPV kapata cancer ya kizazi.

tena mijanaume ya huku inavyoteteaga michepuko, angeandika kuwa amemuambukiza mkewe HIV baada ya kucheouka MARA MOJA TU ingesaidia zaidi.

kasaidiaje wasomaji walioathirika (tena wengine wakiambukizwa na watu waliowaamini) zaidi ya kuwakumbusha kuwa they're broken.

kasaidiaje kupigana na unyanyapaa zaidi ya kuweka msisitizo kuwa hili gonjwa ukipata umeisha.

yani me nilichoona ni dont have random sex you'll get HIV and die!

Tukiichukulia hii hadithi kama fasihi, tutachambua fasihi (kioo cha jamii) badala ya kumchambua mwandishi. Tuchambue hadithi.

well I got curious about this guy nilipoona mtu kasema ana story za HIV za hivi.

Tukumbuke pia anachoandika mwandishi kinakuwa limited na ufahamu wake, uzoefu wake, lengo lake pamoja na contextual variables zingine. Hana udhibiti juu ya mwitikio wa hadhira yake. Kila mtu ataipokea na kuitafsiri kulingana na imani yake, mtazamo wake na uzoefu wake. *Hadhira ni audience.

OFCOURSE. na huo ndo mtazamo wangu.

overall he is a good writer. naona alivyokamata wengi.

 

[ladyfurahia]

Lakini wewe Valentina...ni nini hasa kilichokufanya uamini mazima kuwa kweli jamaa hicho kisa kinamhusu yeye?

Mbona sisi wengine tuliposoma tu tukahisi harufu ya chumvi, paprika, binzari, vitunguu saumu, pilipili, na kila aina ya vikolezo?

Wewe ulishindwa nini?

hahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aisee bora ya wewe uliyeona harufu ya chumvi wengine tuliona harufu ya sukari F1, chotara

 

[ram]

Mentor alikuwa anatafta kiki

My dear unamfahamu Mentor kitambo sana, sina hakika na hiki ulichosema kwamba alikuwa anatafuta kiki....
As Bujibuji said..... Mentor is very intelligent and talented story teller..... I salute him.....!

 

[Inno laka]

Mentor kumbe we ni Afande......