My animati0n

My animati0n

Good Guy

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Hello ladies n gents, well animating is a hobby(i've said it before). After day's work i love to sit around the screen and make all sorts of animations. Today i've decided to share some with you guys. Hope you like it. 🙂 🙂
<strong><em><span style="font-family:comic sans ms;"><font size="4"><span style="color:#ff8c00;">[video=youtube_share;th2Sie30VMk]http://youtu.be/th2Sie30VMk[/video]
 
Jabulani said:
Kazi nzuri na hongera sana! How long did you spend to make that one above?
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Thrilled to hear that. Intro nliifanya last, it just came in mind and did it for about 10mins maximum. Ila the animation took longer than it had to, maana 1st i had no plot so kilichokua kinakuja kichwan ndo nafanya so it added unnecessary time to think out the plot, also I'm kinda occupied so usually i animated for abt 30mins maybe a day. Overall it took 3days i think ila actual animating time I'd say ni kama 2-3 hours. 🙂
 
A. SAUTI
Nimependa kuwa kwa kiasi kikubwa sauti zimeendana na matendo mf. ngumi, mateke na hata urukaji. Sauti ya muziki ingeweza kuwa chini zaidi ili vitendo visikike vizuri. Vinginevyo, sauti naipa alama 60%.

B. VITENDO/MIJONGEO

Hapa pia natoa alama nyingi kwa kuwa mijongeo (movements) ni za kasi ya kukubalika/kupendeza. Kuanzia ukimbiaji, ngumi na mateke ni ya kiwango kinachokaribia kurandana na vitendo katika maisha halisi. Natoa alama 70%.

C. PICHA/MICHORO

Bado. Ningependa kuona sura na maumbo ya watu na vitu/mazingira vinakuwa dhahiri zaidi kuliko sasa. Picha kwa sehemu kubwa ndiyo humvuta mtazamaji. Miti ionekane wazi kabisa kuwa ni miti na watu vivyo hivyo. Natoa alama 30%.

D. CHANGAMOTO

Boresha zaidi ubora wa picha zako. Waweza kuona mfano hapa chini. Ni kazi ya Watanzania hii, japo kuna mkono wa Wazungu (utawala) lakini aliyefanya sanaa ni Mtanzania (kwa kadri ya ufuatiliaji wangu).



Waweza kutembelea tovuti yao hapa.

ANGALIZO: Lakini kama ni hobby tu ni ruksa kutotilia sana maanani maoni yangu, wakati mwingine napata taabu kidogo kuwa wa wastani.

Kila la Heri.
 
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Magembe R. Malima said:
A. SAUTI
Nimependa kuwa kwa kiasi kikubwa sauti zimeendana na matendo mf. ngumi, mateke na hata urukaji. Sauti ya muziki ingeweza kuwa chini zaidi ili vitendo visikike vizuri. Vinginevyo, sauti naipa alama 60%.

B. VITENDO/MIJONGEO

Hapa pia natoa alama nyingi kwa kuwa mijongeo (movements) ni za kasi ya kukubalika/kupendeza. Kuanzia ukimbiaji, ngumi na mateke ni ya kiwango kinachokaribia kurandana na vitendo katika maisha halisi. Natoa alama 70%.

C. PICHA/MICHORO

Bado. Ningependa kuona sura na maumbo ya watu na vitu/mazingira vinakuwa dhahiri zaidi kuliko sasa. Picha kwa sehemu kubwa ndiyo humvuta mtazamaji. Miti ionekane wazi kabisa kuwa ni miti na watu vivyo hivyo. Natoa alama 30%.

D. CHANGAMOTO

Boresha zaidi ubora wa picha zako. Waweza kuona mfano hapa chini. Ni kazi ya Watanzania hii, japo kuna mkono wa Wazungu (utawala) lakini aliyefanya sanaa ni Mtanzania (kwa kadri ya ufuatiliaji wangu).



Waweza kutembelea tovuti yao hapa.

ANGALIZO: Lakini kama ni hobby tu ni ruksa kutotilia sana maanani maoni yangu, wakati mwingine napata taabu kidogo kuwa wa wastani.

Kila la Heri.
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Oh brother Malima, its been a while. I was craving for this, i didn't know it but i really needed to know what you just said.
1st of yeah i kinda had that feeling that the music was a bit too loud but pushed through outta laziness of editing the levels and stuff. But a valid point, definitely noted. 60% you're too kind.
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2nd. I must admit the movement wasn't my best and believe i can do smoother and better movements so 70% gives me SMILES 🙂))
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3rd. Yeah a valid point as well. On the next animations i'll do my best to add in faces to sticks(i kinda love animating sticks for their simplicity, but indeed i can do better with their features). Backgrounds, i do admit i'm not that good and usually hua nachukua imported pics but again NOTED, and will improve on that.
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Changamoto nmezipokea happily, hii ni hobby yeah but very obsessed with it so yeah will put everything into consideration. I want to give out clean and good animations mtu ashindwe hata kuitofautisha na western ones. You might not have known this ila Everything kwenye hii animation nimeifanya kwa kutumia trackpad ya laptop, yes TRACKPAD ya laptop not with a mouse or anything ila nimeagiza graphic tab last week and i believe quality itaongezeka dramatically once i get it. Hao watu wa UBUNGO i'm very familiar with em, mwezi wa tisa walikua na workshop ya animation na kutoa certificates na Full bought animation software(toonboom) ndani ya week 1 kwa sh 700k. ila walikua na nafasi 6 i think za scholarship kwa young artist who aren't in the industry nilienda apply na kuwapa the animations i did in the past, but maybe sikufikia viwango or kuna siasa but i wasn't selected. So i do know their works are good (a bit rigid movements but good paintings though). Appreciate the advice and grading mkuu.
 
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Good Work, Good Guy

Put more effort, learn from animation like: Ice Age, Rango, Kungfu Panda, Madagascar, Tangled etc...
 
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