Hekaheka za Mikundeni, CHADEMA na Limbu

Dotto C. Rangimoto · Jun 27, 2015

HEKAHEKA ZA MIKUNDENI.

Haikuwa mikundeni,
Seuze michorokoni?
Siulize kulikoni,
Uliza kaanza nani?

Halikwisha moyoni,
Litakomaje machoni?
Donda lipone zamani,
Kovu labaki ngozini,

Haikufaa shambani,
Litafanaje kondeni?
Kiroboto na kunguni,
Wana undugu jamani.

Alia wako mwandani,
Mie nitafanya nini?
Mbichi zimekuwa kuni,
Kavu zitakuwa nini?

Ana wema hayawani,
Yule mlala bomani,
Nikuweke kundi gani?
Hufai hata bomani.

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jembe afrika · Jun 27, 2015

Sijui ubongo wangu unachagua vitu vya kuelewa,maana sijaewa kabisa

respect wa boda · Jun 27, 2015

Hivi huu uzi si una qualify kuweko kule celebrity?

BACK TANGANYIKA

chikutentema · Jun 27, 2015

Unajinasibu kuandika mashairi hata kanuni za mashairi hujui, hakuna urari wa vina na mizani. Bull Shit!!!

Bramo · Jun 27, 2015

Njano tano ni Mchumia tumbo

Ritz · Jun 27, 2015

Naona Limbu yupo na Mbowe na Slaa wanapanga mipango.

plolumumba · Jun 27, 2015

Dah ...hivi kuna
jukwaa la milembe huku

Ududu · Jun 27, 2015

Kazi aliyotumwa Limbu imemshinda!!!!

Abunuas · Jun 27, 2015

jembe afrika said:
Sijui ubongo wangu unachagua vitu vya kuelewa,maana sijaewa kabisa

huwezi kuelewa kwa sababu linakugusa pabaya moja kwa moja.

Dotto C. Rangimoto · Jun 27, 2015

chikutentema said:
Unajinasibu kuandika mashairi hata kanuni za mashairi hujui, hakuna urari wa vina na mizani. Bull Shit!!!

Haya bhana,,,sijui pamoja na kujinasibu kwangu, lakini sikukuacha bure na kwa vyovyote madhui yamekufika.

Mtarban · Jun 27, 2015

jembe afrika said:
Sijui ubongo wangu unachagua vitu vya kuelewa,maana sijaewa kabisa

Inahitaji uwe conscious ili uweze kuelewa. wewe siyo great thinker, how comes to understand

Mtarban · Jun 27, 2015

chikutentema said:
Unajinasibu kuandika mashairi hata kanuni za mashairi hujui, hakuna urari wa vina na mizani. Bull Shit!!!

We Tatizo lako haujui aina za mashairi yaani mashairi ya kisasa (hamna ulazma wa kufuata kanuni za urari wa vina na mizani) na Yale ya kimapokeo ( huzingatia kanuni za urari wa vina na mizani). usijitape kukosoa vitu usivyovijuaa

stanlthecreator · Jun 27, 2015

Padri slaa na Limbu ni mtu na Binamu yake

Viol · Jun 27, 2015

Mkuu hii ni qaswida au kwaya!

Viol · Jun 27, 2015

stanlthecreator said:
Padri slaa na Limbu ni mtu na Binamu yake

Ambaye ndo mjomba wa mama yako

Dotto C. Rangimoto · Jun 27, 2015

Ritz said:
Naona Limbu yupo na Mbowe na Slaa wanapanga mipango.

Limbu kavuta fomu ya ubunge kupitia CHADEMA huko Magu.

Dotto C. Rangimoto · Jun 27, 2015

Viol said:
Mkuu hii ni qaswida au kwaya!

wewe waona ni nini?

Viol · Jun 27, 2015

Dotto C. Rangimoto said:
wewe waona ni nini?

Nimeona bangi imekufanya uandike upuuzi

Dotto C. Rangimoto · Jun 27, 2015

Mtarban said:
We Tatizo lako haujui aina za mashairi yaani mashairi ya kisasa (hamna ulazma wa kufuata kanuni za urari wa vina na mizani) na Yale ya kimapokeo ( huzingatia kanuni za urari wa vina na mizani). usijitape kukosoa vitu usivyovijuaa

Uko sahihi kabisa, hata hivyo shairi langu si la kisasa bali ni la kimapokeo na limefuata kanuni zote za kimapokeo. Vina na urari vyote viko sawa, kil a kipande cha mstari kina silabi nane, na mwisho wa kila kipande kumeishia sialabi "ni".

ila watu wanapenda kukokosoa sababu ujumbe haukumfurahisha.

Dotto C. Rangimoto · Jun 27, 2015

Mtarban said:
We Tatizo lako haujui aina za mashairi yaani mashairi ya kisasa (hamna ulazma wa kufuata kanuni za urari wa vina na mizani) na Yale ya kimapokeo ( huzingatia kanuni za urari wa vina na mizani). usijitape kukosoa vitu usivyovijuaa

Uko sahihi kabisa, hata hivyo shairi langu si la kisasa bali ni la kimapokeo na limefuata kanuni zote za kimapokeo. Vina na urari vyote viko sawa, kil a kipande cha mstari kina silabi nane, na mwisho wa kila kipande kumeishia sialabi "ni".

ila watu wanapenda kukokosoa sababu ujumbe haukumfurahisha.

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