Let me remind you to use proper punctuation marks (comma, full stop etc) in your paragraph.Last year I went to see my wife at kibaigwa ,I stayed there for two months spending a lot together with neighbors ,then late on I decided to return Iringa where I am a player at lipuli FC ,after three weeks my wife phoned me ,informing that from today your not allowed to come here because I have heard bad news about you ,ohh my heart was running so fast !I think my self !!what's wrong with me again ? It was on Monday when my wife phoned me ,then on Tuesday I took the bus to kibaigwa when I arrived at the home the house was closed and no one where around even though it was evening ........please JF members correct me for this short story@cube,great vision
Well, I am not that good at English, so anybody feel free to correct me if that is the case. Here are my suggestions....,
In your sentence you've written "I went to see my wife" you can use " I went to visit my wife" or "I visited my wife".
"Late on" it was supposed to be "later on'' which means that... the time or situation after the one that you've been talking about.
"I decided to return" I'd prefer to use " I decided to go back to Iringa" or "I went back" (because that's where you were before) however "to return" Or "I returned " is also correct and acceptable (but it seems very common and it's always good to try new things).
Btw, I like your story but try to work on my suggestions.
PS, Don't try to translate any sentence from Swahili (native language) to English, many times it creates big confusion. Think it in English.
And lastly, I strongly insist on the correct usage of punctuation in your sentences.
Cc. 4G LTE