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Discussion in 'Habari na Hoja mchanganyiko' started by Asha Abdala, Dec 1, 2008.

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    Asha Abdala JF-Expert Member

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    I can not spare,
    The despair I have,
    I have no spare
    I am lost!

    The future is smeared,
    Life is weird,
    I can not repair,
    The Desperation!

    Despite the energy,
    All is not fair,
    No prayer, No pair,
    I am in despair
  2. Pundit

    Pundit JF-Expert Member

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    The despair paired, beyond compare
    With hopelessly bare, unwill to dare
    Like a trip less fare, grossly unfair
    Blinds your stare, like a sun's glare
    Will a crippled Astaire, dance with fanfare?
    And produce a rare, savoir-faire
    Or harbor no care, to jump like a hare
    Despaire paired, beyond compare
    With limitless squares, of dogged airs
    Is despair squared, flat on kitchenware
  3. LazyDog

    LazyDog JF-Expert Member

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    You wrote that in one "go", didn't you? It is not bad
  4. Pundit

    Pundit JF-Expert Member

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    One go is the flow, and bad it is not
    I was kinda slow, and so I thought
    Why not pen a row, that can't be taught
    In the Harvards and Yales, it can't be got
    That flies of the wall, well rounded like a nought
    That sails like a dhow, cute like a boat
    That your mind will blow, while staying afloat
    That's never a chore, but pretty and hot
    With a debonaire glow, like a diamond well cut
    From the gut, I deliver lyrical uppercuts
    Modestly modest, and the rest is a street mutt
    Likea bloodthirsty Mongol mogul's mongrel,
    Stabilizing flows from Manchuria to Montreal
    A cultured scoundrel, not the Hound of the Baskervilles
    The real deal, I'll put a show unlike The Barber of Seville
    I break joker's nuts, so call me The Nutcracker
    Blockading their way, like at the strait of Malacca
    Send them out the race like George Allen and Macaca
    I get irate, like a Mogadishu pirate
    I sky rate then gyrate the dialect of this discussion
    I marinate this diction, and serve it with percussions
    For your enjoyment, the village's wordsmith
    Not Jigga but make you ask "Who you with?"
    Non syndicated, with punchlines to deliver
    Like Ijahman, my father is forever
    Flip culture to street, with that twisted African beat
    It doesn't matter if it's winter, I bring the heat
    Not that glock or the 'matic revolver
    Im talking energy, like a supernovae
    Joker's move over, its braggadocio time
    I hope you can enjoy these few rhymes
    Last edited: Dec 2, 2008