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Though of melancholy and homesickness

Discussion in 'Jukwaa la Lugha' started by Roulette, Oct 17, 2011.

  1. Roulette

    Roulette JF-Expert Member

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    In the darkness of the night
    I feel something is not right.
    There's a silence I apprehend,
    Something I can't touch with Hand .

    there is a part of me feeling cold,
    And my heart is all troubled.
    even my mind is not at ease,
    My whole being is icy cold breeze,

    Alone in a place where I live.
    A hard choice not to leave
    Like a leaf plucked from a tree
    Hanging on a cliff that is me

    How do I dump it into the Sea,
    Kill the though, then wait and see?
    Maybe I'll feel less insecure…
    But deep down, I know the cure:

    The remedy to set me free,
    Is to be where I want to be.
    Travel back where I call home,
    And find warmth and shalom
     
  2. The Boss

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    waaooh........
     
  3. feis buku

    feis buku JF-Expert Member

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    mdada nataka na song of lawino!
     
  4. Roulette

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    Song of Lawino? Ndio ipi?
     
  5. SOBY

    SOBY JF-Expert Member

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    Hii poem umeandika wewe?
    It's so deep and catchy!
     
  6. AshaDii

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    Roullete Umeeandika mwenyewe dear?? Would like to know... Its beautiful..
     
  7. Roulette

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    Ndio darling, niliandika mwenyewe, but I sent it to somebody for his critic. I miss home ile mbaya and I feel so lonely...
     
  8. AshaDii

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    Oh! jamani pole saana dear... You are good lakini eeeh??
     
  9. Roulette

    Roulette JF-Expert Member

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    Asante sana (kwa pole na pongezi). Najiskia kuandika ingine sasa. do you know it is my first poem in English?
     
  10. AshaDii

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    You have got to be kidding.... It means you are a GREAT Writter... or soon to be...
     
  11. King'asti

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    nice one rr, been there i guess. u dont know what u want bt u feel it deep down that something is really missing. poyeee
     
  12. Mwita25

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    Ngoja na mimi nijianzishie mashairi
     
  13. Roulette

    Roulette JF-Expert Member

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    Kusema kweli nilisoma sana za Mzee Mwanakijiji, he has a style that is sooooo light... but yet so deep...
    Ukimsoma unaona kama it is easy to write, and to express yourself (na ndio unapo mjua a good artist) so I decided to try...
    And naona mmependa, so I will just write some more, because I love doing it...
     
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