In the Terrace of Love Unloved

[Mzee Mwanakijiji]

When the darkness falls
Feeling the midnight chills
Like rivers of pain tears flow
Totally forgotten this I know
Overwhelmed by sadness
Embraced by coldness
Alone and lonely
Gone and lowly
In the terrace of love unloved!


In the misery of life
I feel the weight of this strife
Caught up in deceptions
Knowing all the imperfections
This burden I refuse
A better life I choose
Alone and lonely
Gone and lowly
In the terrace of love unloved

A new day shall come
A better place to call home
To love again like never loved
Lifting the pain and be loved
There will be tomorrow
A better day will follow
One and only
Done and surely
In the terrace of love loving!
Tomorrow!

By. M. M. Mwanakijiji (The Voice of the Village)

 

[Roulette]

Yessssss! you are back! and as always, na poem kuhusu mapenzi. I just love it!

 

[Pakawa]

Very true ' A new day shall come, a better place to call home'

 

[SHERRIF ARPAIO]

Mzee Mwanakijiji I see you are following the foot steps of the legendary poet-Shaaban Robert. Big up!!

 

[Mzee Mwanakijiji]

Mzee Mwanakijiji I see you are following the foot steps of the legendary poet-Shaaban Robert. Big up!!

duh.. nyayo kubwa hizo.. miye nadonyoadonyoa tu

 

[TIMING]

MMM... you are a talent mkuu, respect, let me try

 

[Rutashubanyuma]

A new day shall come
A better place to call home
To love again like never loved
Lifting the pain and be loved
There will be tomorrow
A better day will follow
One and only
Done and surely
In the terrace of love loving!
Tomorrow!

this won't happen unless; of course, you surrender your heart to Jesus Christ

 

[TIMING]

this won't happen unless; of course, you surrender your heart to Jesus Christ

mkuu ulisoma fasihi?

 

[Mzee Mwanakijiji]

mkuu ulisoma fasihi?

duh maana tukianza kutoa maana hapa itakuwa kazi

 

[King’asti]

what if he already surrendered? this is a nice poem abt lov. and this is tje grande commandment,let it be!
nice one mkjj, congrats!

this won't happen unless; of course, you surrender your heart to Jesus Christ