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In the Terrace of Love Unloved

Discussion in 'Mahusiano, mapenzi, urafiki' started by Mzee Mwanakijiji, Oct 18, 2011.

  1. Mzee Mwanakijiji

    Mzee Mwanakijiji Platinum Member

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    When the darkness falls
    Feeling the midnight chills
    Like rivers of pain tears flow
    Totally forgotten this I know
    Overwhelmed by sadness
    Embraced by coldness
    Alone and lonely
    Gone and lowly
    In the terrace of love unloved!


    In the misery of life
    I feel the weight of this strife
    Caught up in deceptions
    Knowing all the imperfections
    This burden I refuse
    A better life I choose
    Alone and lonely
    Gone and lowly
    In the terrace of love unloved

    A new day shall come
    A better place to call home
    To love again like never loved
    Lifting the pain and be loved
    There will be tomorrow
    A better day will follow
    One and only
    Done and surely
    In the terrace of love loving!
    Tomorrow!

    By. M. M. Mwanakijiji (The Voice of the Village)
     
  2. Roulette

    Roulette JF-Expert Member

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    Yessssss! you are back! and as always, na poem kuhusu mapenzi. I just love it!
     
  3. Pakawa

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    Very true ' A new day shall come, a better place to call home'
     
  4. SHERRIF ARPAIO

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    Mzee Mwanakijiji I see you are following the foot steps of the legendary poet-Shaaban Robert. Big up!!
     
  5. Mzee Mwanakijiji

    Mzee Mwanakijiji Platinum Member

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    duh.. nyayo kubwa hizo.. miye nadonyoadonyoa tu
     
  6. TIMING

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    MMM... you are a talent mkuu, respect, let me try
     
  7. Rutashubanyuma

    Rutashubanyuma JF-Expert Member

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    this won't happen unless; of course, you surrender your heart to Jesus Christ
     
  8. TIMING

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    mkuu ulisoma fasihi?
     
  9. Mzee Mwanakijiji

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    duh maana tukianza kutoa maana hapa itakuwa kazi
     
  10. King'asti

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    what if he already surrendered? this is a nice poem abt lov. and this is tje grande commandment,let it be!
    nice one mkjj, congrats!
     
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