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I wished you loved me back

Discussion in 'Jukwaa la Lugha' started by Mentor, Dec 14, 2010.

  1. Mentor

    Mentor JF-Expert Member

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    I WISHED YOU LOVED ME BACK


    Form 3 - 1[SUP]st[/SUP] term


    As I stood there with my friends
    on the top floor of the school building
    chatting and laughing on silly jokes.
    I saw a girl coming our way with majestic moves of a baby antelope.
    I thought she was a new student
    for, her beauty I had never seen.

    I stared at her beautiful eyes, lips and soft skin.
    Her body, God must have put an extra hour to complete.
    She greeted us, the voice of a soft-well played piano blues!
    She walked by and gracefully went down the stairs
    I wanted to call her back,
    I wanted to let her know,
    I had fallen in love with her I loved her, but I didn't know if she believed in love at first sight!

    Form 3 - 2[SUP]nd[/SUP] term

    "Apart-together, Apart-together, I cross, I kick, Apart-together"
    I was leading the morning exercises at the assembly.
    I saw her somewhere in the line
    I smiled..she smiled back, or was she laughing with her friend?
    I saw her everywhere I went
    I smiled at her every time we met
    She smiled back..or was it my imagination?
    We met again on the staircase
    I wanted to call her back
    I wanted to let her know,
    I had fallen in love with her
    I loved her, but I didn't know if she believed in love at first sight!

    Form 4 - 1[SUP]st[/SUP] term

    My final year in school and life got serious
    walking wit books all time..or was it to create the image?
    I still saw her around, this time she came to my class
    she had grown a bit, but still looked beautiful.
    during sports..was it the Zebra house
    I only went to see her, and it was worth it.
    I couldn't take it anymore so "Hi", I said
    and she replied, with a smile..or am I still dreaming?
    No, she really smiled..I saw it!

    I thought what a piece of work God had created
    I was dying inside, of a disease highly infectious
    She came to my class again, to talk to her friend
    She left the class
    I wanted to call her back
    I wanted to let her know,
    I had fallen in love with her
    I loved her, but I didn't know if she believed in love at first sight!

    Form 4 - 2[SUP]nd [/SUP]term

    No lies, life was really tough - although now it looks so simple
    Maths, Physics, Chemistry and all subjects I had forced myself to do
    But above all, I still saw her - more in my dreams this time!
    I wasn't a genius or I would have devised a love potion for her
    Or one to kill the viruses in me rather...

    Then a friend of a friend told me to say it, for, you never know
    Friday evening, running home late
    We crossed path as she went to class
    I wanted to call her back
    I wanted to let her know,
    I had fallen in love with her
    I loved her, but I didn't know if she believed in love at first sight!

    Form 4 - 2[SUP]nd[/SUP] term

    Exams came near...so near life became unbearable
    I received cards from friends
    but one that caught my attention..was this from her
    I never saw it coming
    I could have sworn I never expected a thing from her..I felt so great!
    I wanted to thank her
    I wrote her a note
    I gave it to her through the classroom window..she walked away
    I wanted to call her back
    I wanted to let her know,
    I had fallen in love with her
    I loved her, but I didn't know if she believed in love at first sight!

    After Graduation

    I went on with life, High school and College
    always asking myself what if I took the risk
    what if I said it all
    what if I called her back?

    Would she just send me back and say she didn't love me?
    I was dying inside, thinking without an answer
    I wished I met met her someway
    There without hesitation
    I would have called her back
    I would have let her know,
    I had fallen in love with her
    I loved her, but I didn't know if she believed in love at first sight!


    Today

    Browsing...my favorite tabs open
    I see a new mail in my face-book account
    I look to see who sent it
    A colleague at high school some class behind me

    Subject: I Wished You Loved Me Back
    To: Mentor
    From: Her

    This is what it read:

    I saw you walking past our class one day
    I thought what a handsome man you were
    I saw you everywhere since then
    I saw you passing me by without notice
    I wanted to call you back,
    I wanted to let you know,
    I had fallen in love with you
    I loved you, but I didn't know if you believed in love at first sight!

    DISCLAIMER:The Characters and incidents portrayed and the names herein are fictitious and any similarity to the name, character or history of any actual persons living or dead is entirely coincidental and unintentional.


    Cc: mwekundu, Toria, Kaizer, mwallu, Heaven on earth, mimi49, Asprin, Kongosho (ignore the disclaimer..lol), watu8, et al
     
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  2. Mentor

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    PS: MMM, nimekumiss humu jukwaani...tafadhali rudi!
     
  3. Pearl

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    wow tso lovely jamani,duh ukiambiwa hivi ndo utajua kweli mapenzi matam khaaaa
     
  4. Mentor

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    Lulu, sijui unafanyaje unapopatwa na masibu kama haya...waendelea kumfukuzia wa kwanza ama wahamisha mapenzi kwa huyu mupya!??
     
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    Daaaamn those good old days of my youth...i dont know where these wits ol went!
    Madam Roulette, see i told u i used to b a nice poet..nowadays the likes of lara 1 have made love meaningless!!! cacico babu Asprin alishawahi kukughania beti japo chache!??
    shem Judgement na kaka ruttashobolwa..akina beibe nasty na Madame B wameshapata bahati hii!??
    Mzee wa likes Arushaone, sikumojamoja m-surprise mamaa kwa kapoem kazuuri kafupi tu!
    Shem Kaizer ushawahi kumwandikia dadangu AshaDii shairi?? au basi mkeo mpya gfsonwin!?? sweetlady, snowhite nimesoma hili poem leo nikawakumbuka..a dedication to u!


    To/For my darling Catherine...with love, in love!
    Mentor.
     
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    Arushaone JF-Expert Member

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    Madame B: Saying "I love you" is a hard thing to do. You might be worried if you are really expressing your truly feelings or if you are being pressured into it. Everyone has their own time when they think that it is appropriate to say I love you. There is no right or wrong time. However, it is hurtful when an individual makes himself vulnerable and says, I love you, and his words are not returned. Sometimes it may be a simple act of courtesy to return the sentiment. On the other hand you may be setting him up for false expectations about the potential for a relationship. I LOVE YOU Madame B
    Always Yours Arushaone


     
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  7. Gaijin

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    Mentor

    Shairi la mtindo wa "kufokafoka" limo?
     
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  8. Mentor

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    Mh hilo labda vijana wa dot com kina junior.cux C6 Erickb52 ndo watakusaidia...
     
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    What's wrong with mashairi ya kufokafoka?

    Mbona kina JayZ na Dr.Dre si vijana na wanatuma jumbe zao kwa kutumia mashairi ya kufokafoka?
     
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    Aaaaaaaah! Jamani Mbona mwanionea? SIJASEMA LOVE MEANINGLESS EXCEPT LOVE IS WICKED!!!!!!!!!!!! PARTNER BE AWARE!!!!!!!
     
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    See...love no be wicked..love be sacred madam.
    Give t a chance!
     
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    lara 1 JF-Expert Member

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    Love is sacred bt Them People are WICKED OOOOH! Hence them PEOPLE MAKE THY LOVE WICKED, VERY WICKED!
     
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    if i can turn back the hands of time
     
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    Wishes aint horses. . . Face it!
     
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    I agree wit u King'asti..i already did n am getting married soon...will infirm u in person.
     
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    Ewh, hongera sana kaka. Umlete wifi hapa tumfunde. Wahi kabla NATALIA na lara 1 hawajapata ban, kuna somo muhimu la jinsi ya kuchuna mume.
     
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    mmmmh, kuntu!!
     
  18. Mentor

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    Hahah hufai wewe..ntampeleka kwa dada gfsonwin na snowhite et al...na wafananao na hao.
     
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    is this what you wanted to tell me about my lito bro?

    i loved it dearly
     
  20. Mentor

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    Hahah....pm kasome utaelewa dada angu.
     
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