Ston Merchant
JF-Expert Member
- Aug 1, 2011
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I note that you have begun and I congratulate you. Your level is actually quite good. I am myself not all that good, and I need people to correct me too. We need to encourage each other. Many mistakes can be avoided by using shorter sentences, especially when our command of the language is not very advanced.
keep trying...... the red is a repitition, ain't proper grammar.